Monday, April 1, 2013

Comments for Kaylee and Dallin: Steve Jobs

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The young Steve Jobs.

10 comments:

  1. Positive: Good information about Apple.
    Negative: More about his start.

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  2. You had a lot of good facts and stats about Steve and his companies. There probably should have been more interpretation in your presentation though about why he was iconic rather than why he was successful.

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  3. With everything we hear about Steve Jobs I don't think I ever knew about his early life which you guys explained nicely. There was room for improvement in your analysis, maybe extending it by going into detail what your own thoughts were on the topic.

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  4. I think this was an outstanding topic and also presented well. I like how the presenters gave a huge amount of information about Steve Jobs. But also a deep thinking and individual opinions would have been good to be told during presentation. Overall It was quite outstanding topic.

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  5. i like the way they new what they were talking about. also they told us more about how important Steve jobs were.

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  6. Your facts were really good with Steve Jobs and the companies he owned. I thought that you guys did a really good job going in detail with them as well. Another thing I enjoyed was your individual thoughts on your topic, which made it more interesting.

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  7. The flow of your information was really good and you seemed to be fully educated about your topic. Knowing more details about his work would have been good but the amount of information you had got the point across.

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  8. You had great information on Jobs and his successes. I liked how you explained how is personality was what made him iconic.

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  9. great information on job the only criticism i had is you should have had more informatino about him recently regarding his death and recent stepping dwn from apple

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  10. It thought it was cool that you talked so much about apple, especially because that is such a hot topic these days with technology.

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